Greetings newcomer, I'm uttterly writing a story on a whim and of course I'm still a beginner. Be sure to check it out, feel free to send me some critics, suggestion, or even flame me, I'll be glad to read them. I must apologize if my english language isn't that well, there may be some grammar mistakes. Well, I think that's all about the introduction, just head to my story for the real deal, ya know what I mean.