I saw you ask for ideas and I thought I would maybe give you a few (you don't have to use any but I thought I would offer them). You could write about Tim getting more and more suspicious, like the things Lucy does or doesn't do that make him suspicious like different instances on different days yk?(becoming more and more concerning/suspicious as time goes on) Like flinching, eye bags, swollen and red eyes, long sleeves, avoiding lunch, changing in stalls away from everyone else, shaking, panic attacks that she tries to hide, avoiding bars, Lucy getting shoved by a suspect and Tim catching her and lifting her and feeling how light she is, etc and like slowing building up to like Tim seeing bl00d running down her hand from her sleeve, her accidentally whimpering 'please don't hurt me' and flinching when he yells at her, Tim watching Lucy pass out, Tim following Lucy to the bathroom to steal her duty belt and hearing her purg!ng, a suspect pulling up Lucy's sleeve and Tim seeing her cut$, Tim confronting Lucy about the cuts and they argue and Lucy accidentally revealing that she wants to d!e, etc if that makes sense. I'm really enjoying the story so far and I'm really excited to see where it goes <3
