mackenzie533383

guys if you can put your comments on my book that would be great please i would like to keep track of them!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!XP

LordOfAutumn

Mack, maybe you need to keep on with your story, it takes time to get readers, when I had my first three chapters, nearly no one read it, it takes time, just keep on, make it better, only tip I have.

mackenzie533383

@LordOfAutumn still not it but that's alright it's @mackenzie533383
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LordOfAutumn

@mackenzie855 oopssss I wrote Mackenzie 
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LordOfAutumn

@mackenzie I don't know umm, could be six hours or eight hours
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ceceisdeadinside

I need my dam sword riptide....... Seriously I lost it and Annabeth won't help me (shocker)........wait a minute.... Never mind it was in my pocket the WHOLE time!!!! Oops!!

mackenzie533383

@Cece_Thomas_Lover  awesome... wait how did you LOSE RIPTIDE
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isbetosaurus

I love your book!

isbetosaurus

@Weirdow507  no prob. Can you please check out my book "Svet to the rescue"? It'll be nice if you give me a suggestion by asking me at comment. Thanks!
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