maxn52373

Bro can you do perspective on both sides and perspectives of enemy soldier what they felt in that moment  the reaction and other feeling as well

Bocester

Hey, bro, I need to gather more data before make big step, what do you think about the new chapter? In many aspect like action, worldbuilding, and many more? Any positive and negative though? I already receive some negative part about it from fellow Indonesian like to many characters become philosophy, not make sense, etc.

Macbookprouser70

Thanks for following me I would like some advice for my incoming fan fic

maxn52373

@Macbookprouser70  damn I didn't see that I only saw 2 the last time
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Macbookprouser70

@maxn52373 I know I posted a few chapter what do you think
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maxn52373

@Macbookprouser70 will  count dooku  home get summoned either his supporters you know In star war Serenno he was a governor there and he was good I mean he may have done some bad things due to how brutal his methods were but it was the good of the galaxy and his ancestral home Serenno and he was right  about the republic corruption I mean they exploited everyone and knew who was behing everything and tried to warn everyone and stop it but he was still used in the end I kinda felt bad for his ending all he wanted was bring order and peace.
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