lttlilly
Hi dear! I'm so sorry. I hate doing spam but i started writing a dark romance about mafia. if you stop by and give me your opinion I would be very happy! otherwise it doesn't matter thanks anyway❤️❤️
I hope you have a nice one❤️
lttlilly
Thank you so much for the feedback, you were very kind to read! ❤️ what do you suggest to improve? Could I insert more descriptions or sensations? I admit that the type of narration I chose doesn't help me much. I will definitely make changes as I go along, as I continue to write I hope to improve
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meisweird-
@lttlilly i read the first few chapters the buildup is nice however i think the details can be worked on a little bit otherwise good going
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meisweird-
@koomiva lmk wether you like it or not
koomiva
Hey have you read Storm and silence ? Is that worth reading? I'm finding it quite big T-T
PennyOsullivan
HEAVY ON THE HARDIN SCOTT COUKD RUN ME IVER AND ID THANK HIM