author_bluelotus

Hi @meisweird-
          
          If you are interested, please take a moment to read, vote, and comment on my story.
          
          TROPES:
          
          Billionaire Romance
          Mature Content
          Green Flag MCs
          Royal x Commoner
          Grumpy x Sunshine
          She is the only one who can calm him
          Reader ml x Reader fl
          Rom-com
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/395757567-lost-in-his-love

lttlilly

Hi dear! I'm so sorry. I hate doing spam but i started writing a dark romance about mafia. if you stop by and give me your opinion I would be very happy! otherwise it doesn't matter thanks anyway❤️❤️
          I hope you have a nice one❤️

lttlilly

Thank you so much for the feedback, you were very kind to read! ❤️ what do you suggest to improve? Could I insert more descriptions or sensations? I admit that the type of narration I chose doesn't help me much. I will definitely make changes as I go along, as I continue to write I hope to improve
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meisweird-

@lttlilly i read the first few chapters 
            the buildup is nice
            however i think the details can be worked on a little bit otherwise good going 
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koomiva

Hey have you read Storm and silence ? Is that worth reading? I'm finding it quite big T-T

koomiva

@koomiva imma give it a chance then
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meisweird-

@koomiva i have read like 4 books of the series 
            and i found it pretty alluring
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PennyOsullivan

HEAVY ON THE HARDIN SCOTT COUKD RUN ME IVER AND ID THANK HIM

lilac2point0

@meisweird- if you don't mind could you perhaps check out my boom
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lilac2point0

@PennyOsullivan if you don't mind could you perhaps check out my book
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