@melljoe
So I received some great criticism and a relative of mine told me to elongate my chapters and add more imagery to all of my chapters, so I will be editing my whole story again and adding more things to it. I guess I'll try to make it more realistic but then again since there are vampires in it, it shouldn't really be realistic. Anyways sorry I'm making all these changes, I just really want my story to be amazing.
hey guys! I just want to thank all the people who have helped get my story this far. I honestly thought I would never get 1k reads and over 80 votes. It's been an honor to write a story that isn't too cliche, too romancy, but an action-packed, plot-twisting story. Anyways feel free to comment or post on my board or story on whether you're #teamtristan or #teamhim and which one Nathalia should be with. I hope to update the new chapter soon and to finish the book by July and start the second book in the trilogy!
If I feel like it, which I kind of do, in the next hour or so Chapter 18, the chapter you've all been waiting for, will be posted. Thanks to those who remained patient and actually enjoy my story, it means a lot to me. Anyways, back to writing c:
Thanks for the follow :)
Happy Birthday!!
It's my birthday! I'm excited but I shouldn't be... I mean I am one year closer to dying :D
I have finally finished editing all seventeen Chapters. Those who have read them already, reread them. I changed a few things including dialogue. Now I can focus on updating. Yeee, who's excited :D?
Thanks for the follow please check out my first series Yoroi Kitsune
@TheEgotist nothing much, playing TWOM or reading or writing or sleeping.
@Park_Sheridan thanks. and you're welcome for the follow.
