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melljoe
Jun 08, 2015 07:49PM
So I received some great criticism and a relative of mine told me to elongate my chapters and add more imagery to all of my chapters, so I will be editing my whole story again and adding more things...View all Conversations
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Forsaken
I used to be happy, but I became depressed after my mother passed away. My walls grew and I hid behind them...