miercury

Don't compare someone's story to others. There's no comparison between the sun and the moon. They shine when it's their time. We shouldn't compare someone's work to others because they've got different plots, different characters, different languages used and most importantly because everyone got unique styles in writing stories. We have the same reasons as to why we write stories. We don't write to impress others, we don't write to be compared to others but we write because it's our passion, we write because we have a story to tell. So appreciate every work because it is written with effort and passion. 

mysticbutterflyy

@miercury YES SAY IT LOUDER!!!!
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themaninyourmovie

Baby you left something! You left a lesson for those people who compare someone's work to others. It's just a short message but there's a lesson for us to learn. That we shouldn't compare, because all of our works are perfect in a unique way. So what I was trying to say is. LOUDER FOR THE PEOPLE AT THE BACK. 
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dark_wallflower

Your writing is ✨ s t u n n i n g ✨

miercury

@imanotherwallflower Dₒₙ'ₜ ₗᵢₑ. 
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thwkkzz

hellooo ate HAHAHAHAHA di mo ko kilala pero kilala kita huhu
          
          pakalat! HAAHHAHAHHA sorry agaad

Laivishi

@miercury wag mo i-expose gender ko
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Stairah

@miercury wag niyo ako isali sa mga kalokohan niyo bhie
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miercury

@Laivishi si ate Airah lang kasi nilalandi mo eh HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
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princeeelol

Hi, so uh your friend (i assume) said that to check ur book out, all I can say is, the way you write is amazing and just wanna say to keep doing what u love boo ♡ 

miercury

@hxneymilk__ awieee thank you so much for the compliment, for giving me words of encouragement, and for spending some of your spare time checking out my work. Thank you and have a great day ^^
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unfoldthywords

Geniá Giatí just hit #1 in ANNIHILATION and ESCAPED  #2 in WOES, PARIAH, and AVARICE
          
          and also HAPPY 1.5K READS ON GENIÁ GIATÍ

unfoldthywords

paq sanyong lahat
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Laivishi

@XeniaMaeve tol k lang yan, di pa ko sinampal ng 1131
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dragmetogehenna

WAWA NIA HAHAHAHAHAHA
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vibxchxck

Hello there! I was requested by @Laivishi to read your story, and may I just say you have an INCREDIBLE talent for writing? It's so poetic, I wish I could write like yours! All I can do is a meme book, haha. But seriously, your writing is spectacular! Keep up the fantastic work!

vibxchxck

@miercury You should seriously consider being a poet, ngl
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miercury

@MastermindShuichi awwiee, thank you so much. You too, keep on making memes and sketches. Let thy art dance with thy ink. Have a great day ^^
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-almxnd

Heyo! I really like your story! I am not really good with giving tips since I am still learning myself, but know that I really enjoyed your book. It has wonderful descriptive characteristics, and it is definitely nice dictionary, which I think is necessary for a book to be satisfying. 
          The chapters are long and the plot acts like a magnet; it's pulling you towards the deepest lengths of the story and you just wanna read more.
          Also, I believe that the word "Giatí" is a Greek one (For those who don't know, it means: "why")? Let me tell you that you have used it really well, and I am talking as a Greek person myself. 
          My last word is this: if you ever need help with editing - I saw that you don't review your chapters, but I'd be happy to help honestly - hit me up! Overall, you are doing really good! Keep it up author-san! 

miercury

@https-jang awieee, I can't believe that someone finally noticed the title of my work. (Yes, Geniá Giatí actually means: Generation Why.) It'll be such an honor to hit that chat button, I would be glad to give you a message. Thank you so much for the offer. You too, keep on writing and have a great day ^^
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jansoledad

Hi Ms. A! Hindi ako magaling sa pagcri-critique na yan pero sasabihin ko na lang ang opinion ko sa story niyo po. Honestly, parang hindi ka naman baguhan sa pagsusulat gaya ng sinabi mg kaibigan mo. The words and all, grabe. Partida hindi pa english ang first language niyo po. Nagawa niyo talaga ang number one rule sa pagsusulat, Show Don't Tell. I'm really amaze how you use words. Nakakabuo talaga ako ng imahe sa utak ng kung ano ang nangyayari sa kwento niyo. Sa una pa lang, catchy na po. Wala naman akong nakikitang problema sa mga grammars or spelling lung meron man ay sobrang minor na talaga. Napakalinis po sana ol haha. So ayun, magsulat lang po kayo. With that kind of work, baka the next days months or years, mas dadami pa po ang tatangkilik sa gawa niyo.
          
          -alassie :)

miercury

@alassie awieee thank you so much po. Hindi naman talaga ganon kaganda yung work ko, pero reading your message made me convince myself na through the past few days may improvement yung pagsusulat ko. Frankly speaking, I'll give credit to those wonderful writers who gave me tips and pointed out my mistakes. If it weren't for them then my work would've been contaminated with a lot of errors. Thank you so much for spending some of your spare time checking out my work. Kayo din po, keep on writing and have a great day ^^
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