mikekalmbach

I was looking through the undiscovered fantasy adventure stories, and your description popped out at me.  I read quite a few stories last night, but yours was the first.  :-)  
          	
          	Your writing style was pretty good, so I thought I'd give some tips on how to improve the base story.  I mentor a lot of people, and am always looking for talented writers that I can help take to the next level.  Keep writing!

thevelvetrose

Hey Mike, welcome to Wattpad! *cheers and throws something awesome in the air that rains down)
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mikekalmbach

I was looking through the undiscovered fantasy adventure stories, and your description popped out at me.  I read quite a few stories last night, but yours was the first.  :-)  
          
          Your writing style was pretty good, so I thought I'd give some tips on how to improve the base story.  I mentor a lot of people, and am always looking for talented writers that I can help take to the next level.  Keep writing!