milk_a3

what genres are people most interested in on wattpad? what draws you to a book?

annoyingdad

@milk_a3 people like jonas brothers fanfiction. idk. i saw some girlypop in front of me reading it during a lecture lol. the other dude next to her was looking up pictures of boobies.
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SiameseIfYouPlease

@milk_a3 woahh long time no see lmao
          	  I'm drawn into whump oof so Dot fulfilled that 
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milk_a3

what genres are people most interested in on wattpad? what draws you to a book?

annoyingdad

@milk_a3 people like jonas brothers fanfiction. idk. i saw some girlypop in front of me reading it during a lecture lol. the other dude next to her was looking up pictures of boobies.
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SiameseIfYouPlease

@milk_a3 woahh long time no see lmao
            I'm drawn into whump oof so Dot fulfilled that 
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milk_a3

i'm thinking of rewriting dot. would anyone be interested in a new and improved version?

milk_a3

@fatality_wins alright i'll start thinking about that then :>
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milk_a3

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hello everyone, sorry for being offline a lot. my exams are over now and i've finished The Lie Of The Crown (i've discovered that i hate editing with a passion, so it's taking me a very long time to go through it and rewrite all the parts that don't work) 
          
          i started a new book which doesn't have a title yet but i'm debating if i should put here. i'll give an extract and anyone who sees it can tell me if they'd be interested in seeing more or not. if no one answers, i'll take it as a no.
          
          anything like *this* should be in italics
          
          "*This human is a fucking idiot.*
          
              Oisín tilted her head and stood over the slumped figure. Half of her brain told her that she probably shouldn't kick him while he was down, but she supposed that was probably the side endowed to her by her mother and kicked him anyway.
          
              "Are you awake?" She asked, then nearly kicked herself for asking such a redundant question. *Ah, yes. This fainted human is quite clearly awake.*
          
              A rabbit squirmed in her earth-painted hands. "Oh, right," muttered Oisín, and wrung its neck before she forgot to again. It twitched, twitched some more, then laid still. Things took a while to die here."

O-rano

~♡ cool
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SiameseIfYouPlease

What happened to lie of the crown its gone

milk_a3

@SiameseIfYouPlease yeah! and dw it's ok haha. ill give out the pdf to anyone that wants to later :)
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SiameseIfYouPlease

@milk_a3 and omggg 100k already?!? Bro that's incredible 
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milk_a3

hi 
          
          this is @ anyone who's read my book dot
          
          can you please tell me the things you didn't like about it/any complaints/anything that doesn't make sense or is wrong with it?
          
          be harsh and please don't sugarcoat (i know the first draft is awful ok rip) i need to make sure i fix it all in the second draft <3

milk_a3

my new story is 'the lie of the crown' on my profile :D
            
            and yeah! ty for the suggestion, i'm doing a lot of work on character consistency so :3 very helpful /gen
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SiameseIfYouPlease

Ig maybe smooth out Tiro going from sadistic to a pathetic bastard 
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milk_a3

between a lack of motivation, trying to finish this short i'm working on, writing the final 1 or 2 chapters of dot and trying to make sure that SNM gets regular enough attention,,, updates of all my stuff is going to be pretty few and far between, sorry guys

SiameseIfYouPlease

@milk_a3 Oh wow, can't wait till read!
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milk_a3

*when i edit the final chapter
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