Aastha Tiwari

Tnx for voting 

All the best with ur new book

Dear readers,  I am really sorry but I'm not a good writer so I got your point and according to it I have deleted the story and started a new one which is based on revolution and selfless love so take a note of it

Posted a new one

@ShivaHolic  sorry but I have already deleted the story

'Sanam re' your book is justifying rape and molestation. No I mean I know that you can write whatever you want but you can't write something which will create a negative impact on someone. Your plot was not at all right. You could have used a better storyline. If you wanted to write on rape then why had you shown Bondita forgiving Anirudh? And Anirudh not even getting a punishment from her? Didn't everyone else will think like ki chalo bhai ek ladki ka rape karte hain. Vo bhaag jaayegi firr vaapis aayegi aur hume maaf kar degi. Is this right? Being a girl I can't believe that you just glorified rape. 
          
          I don't have any hate towards you but please delete the story. It will create a lot of negative impact on youngsters who will read your story. Please it's a humble request. Hope you understand! 

Ma'am, Please Go ahead and see what you've written in "SANAM RE". I don't want to sound rude but the show itself is against rape. RAPE is a very critical and sensitive thing. And promoting it is not okay. Many young children are on wattpad. They might think it is okay. ARC is a man of ethics,  morals and values. He would never ever do such a thing. He is NOT a pedophile. We being adults should understand and not promote such things.
          
          
          
          
          Hope u understand
          No hate towards u

Just read your book titled " Sanam Re". I am very sorry to say but what you have written in the book is absolutely irritating. You have not only destroyed the characters but also glorified rape. Firstly toh apne ARC ke character ko pura barbad kardiya. He is a man who has immense respect for women in his heart, and Bondita is his soul, his dil ka sukoon, his jine ki wajah. Showing him raping Bondita has destroyed your writing completely. Moreover do you think a girl of 16 years will be able to overcome the trauma of rape so easily ? Never......aare no one can accept the rape. And forgiving someone for such a heinous action is absolutely rubbish. 
          
          I hope you will be understanding my point and change your plot. 
          

Just read your book " Sanam Re". Tbh what you have written about Anirudh and Bondita is something that anyone wouldn't like. Anirudh is someone who never stands with wrong but in your story you are showing him as a Pephodile. Is Anirudh like that? Never. Instead he has immense respect for Bondita. And Bondita, being a strong girl , has been shown as she is fine with everything which happened with her. Bondita, is a girl who stands for the rights, supports the truth and fights with the wrong one.This is something which is not liked by any of the readers. Rape. In your story you are justifying Rape. Rape is something, for which you have to raise your voice, not sitting silently somewhere in the corner and forgiving the person. How can Bondita forgive after so much happened with her? Foremost how can Anirudh do anything to her like this?
          
          I am sorry if I am sounding rude or something but you have ruined the character in your story.
          

Just read your book 'Sanam Re'. I'm utterly perplexed at the way you justified a man raping a minor. You can write whatever you want but don't you think glorifying molestation is way too over the top. No personal hate. The thing is that this irked me. The ff you wrote is for and from Barrister Babu which is a show which speaks against such things. And in your story, the main character raped a 16 year old Bondita and she forgave him instead of speaking against it!? Okay even if we don't drag the show or ARC in between, did you not just glorify child abuse? It not only promotes pedophilia but also promotes wrong things. RAPE can never be justified. Hope you are able to understand my point here. It's not like I want to make you look down or anything but when something is wrong, we need to speak up, right? Im just doing that. Hope you don't mind.