taledust

hi mirrabia, i just finish reading your book and i gotta say- it was beautifully written and i really love it. Just make sure to give paragraph for shorter scenes and maybe add a little more dialogue. Im looking forward for part two :)
          
          xx ghaevia

mirrabia

@taledust thank you so much, that means a lot, as for paragraphing I'll read a book of yours for guidance ;) 
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