Thank you so much for the feedback. So for the car thing, I'm not a huge fan of them either. But for the next chapter I will put the picture as one of those cars.. Or if you watch supernatural, the car Sam and Dean drive is the same as Aurora's pretty much.
The lavender hair being natural will be explained later on in the story and hopefully make sense to everyone who feels like reading my story.
As for the time thing being confusing, I will try to fix that, make it more obvious or something some how..
There was no editing done on the chapter so I'm glad there are so few grammar mistakes. I try to not make many of those. xD
I am really glad you like what I have so far, and I will try updating soon. Thank you so much.