missmaryam09

@djimcintosh I forgot to add this stuff: The sstory is more of a book series I've been planning but just recently only cranked out twenty-some pages of different scenes. I'll post it on here sometime for sure. I just need to find the time! And it'sabout a group of friends who discover that they have powers correlating to mythical creatures, the Five Elements (or at least my version of it) and different deities around the world. So really, it's kind of several fantasy novels mashed into one. :)

MadisonVanOrsow

Thank you so much for the feedback. So for the car thing, I'm not a huge fan of them either. But for the next chapter I will put the picture as one of those cars.. Or if you watch supernatural, the car Sam and Dean drive is the same as Aurora's pretty much. 
          The lavender hair being natural will be explained later on in the story and hopefully make sense to everyone who feels like reading my story. 
          As for the time thing being confusing, I will try to fix that, make it more obvious or something some how.. 
          There was no editing done on the chapter so I'm glad there are so few grammar mistakes. I try to not make many of those. xD 
          I am really glad you like what I have so far, and I will try updating soon. Thank you so much. 

missmaryam09

@MadisonBre.Ah OK then. However, keep in mind that sometimes it is better to show than tell and you might not always be lucky enough to have the picture of the car posted somewhere in an actual book. :)
            
            Exactly why I will keep reading on! Curiousity must be sated!
            
            Good ideas. Keep it up. :)
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