@ScarlettBlackDaisy
Hi.I started reading a few chapters of your book.The plot is kind of promising but the actual storytelling is a bit simple and common. I'm expexting a more intense scenes since the plot is pointing me in that way. But maybe, it's how you prefer writing your stories and I can't fault you with that. It's just, I'm seeking a more intense emotions, intense language for an even more intense plot twist in every stories that I've read and want to read. If you notice my reading lists, I don't have a specific genre. I will read anything that has a good story plot and I always look at the way the author write their stories. If I will to give criticism about your story, I would say that it is a simple one that almost borderlines being boring. No offense by the way. Just something for you to ponder on. I don't necessarily gives feedbacks but I've seen you drop a message so. Can I ask you something rather? Is English your native language?
