I have completely re- written Chapter 1 of Sacrilege. It's gone from over 5000 words to just over 3000 words. If anyone would be willing to do a re-read and let me know if this new rewrite works or doesn't work, I would be in your debt. Much obliged.
I have completely re- written Chapter 1 of Sacrilege. It's gone from over 5000 words to just over 3000 words. If anyone would be willing to do a re-read and let me know if this new rewrite works or doesn't work, I would be in your debt. Much obliged.
Thanks for adding "Wearing Her Shoe" to your reading list. Hope you enjoy it :D Trust me, it gets better as you read on, so don't judge it from the first chapters :D
Question? Do you get another 'READ' every time you log onto the site and check your story. I just noticed that I logged on with a certain amount of reads and then re-logged on about five minutes later and had another 'READ.'
Or maybe I'll losing my mind. Help!
Answer, mine does that so I guess the answer is yes. Thanks for the feedback on the Luckiest Girl Alive(Almost).I'll have a look at sacrilege for you over the weekend.
Cheers
Andrew
Hi there and thanks for the follow. Would you like some feedback on your work? I'd love some on the Luckiest Girl Alive if you get the chance.
Cheers
Andrew
I definitely plan to read and leave some detailed comments Andrew. Your stuff looked so intriguing, I had to follow. I am going to have some free time over the next few days and look forward to reading Luckiest Girl Alive,Any feedback you could give me on my story would be much appreciated.