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monicah21
Oct 29, 2013 01:10PM
I have completely re- written Chapter 1 of Sacrilege. It's gone from over 5000 words to just over 3000 words. If anyone would be willing to do a re-read and let me know if this new rewrite works or d...View all Conversations
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Sacrilege
Coralee Bradbury knows she’s a lucky girl. Adopted by Anya and Dr. Peter when she was a baby, she lives a co...