Rissa

Hey guys im writing another story because i have writers block <3 its called Once Upon A Time... i always wanted to share my thoughts so here it is :) try not to be disturbed... :/

Im baaaaaaaack! okay so im up to major editing in my story... PLEASE help me!!! don't be mean but give me your all EVERYTHING you want me to fix tell me, grammar EVERYTHING! im going to make this story great!!! Oh and wish me good luck! im running the mile again tomorrow...

okay this amazing author named Elyse0508 made a awsome story called my legacy READ IT AND LOVE IT i know i did :D
          

@Elyse0508 I'd be lying if I said I wouldn't love to! Thanks so much!

@dancingontherainbow i dont know if i replied yet but if i didnt thanks for the tips im really glad for your help as long as you dont rip into me and say 
          " your a horrible author you need periods! Idiot! " im good and please tell me anything you find wrong i was going to edit when im done but ive been editing in my spare time so youll be a big help. Oh and not to make excuses but my nook i type on doesnt save well so im trying. Um. Just keep telling me what you dont like or what is confusing ill try to explain better and fix it. Always room for improvement huh?  Im rambling sorry... anyways id love more feedback from you! And maybe you can recomend one of your stories!

hey guys sorry to ask but if you reread loving a god named thor ( the first chapter) it will be very helpful i explianed more stuff like why her foster mother locked her into that room..., XD

HEY GUYS IM GOING TO EDIT AFTER I FINISH WRITHING MY STORIES
          sorry left caps lock on :D luv u guyx

hey, thanks for the add :)