moonboywales

Thanks that’s really kind. Still very much a work in progress. Have about 6 chapters done but not ready to post more yet :) 

Hi! I really liked your story, and I want to leave some feedback so more people can reach it. Maybe a more gripping description could help? Telling us about the main characters and the plot, but not giving too much away, to hook readers in. This is Wattpad gold, and I want it to reach more people!