moonlitkitten

Sooooo forgetting who is who in your story (as it is based on my life) is really bad. I spent a good 5 minutes going "who the sh*t is Emilio!" (whom you have never met in the old or new version)
          	
          	whoops!
          	
          	( I have a document that has the names like this. Say Emilio was a guy named Jafar it would appear
          	
          	Emilio - J
          	
          	so I got confused! )

moonlitkitten

Sooooo forgetting who is who in your story (as it is based on my life) is really bad. I spent a good 5 minutes going "who the sh*t is Emilio!" (whom you have never met in the old or new version)
          
          whoops!
          
          ( I have a document that has the names like this. Say Emilio was a guy named Jafar it would appear
          
          Emilio - J
          
          so I got confused! )

ZoeyJohnson2

Can't Wait for the romance Kitty !! Please write it... i enjoy your story so much and i think my english teacher will (we are doing biographies this term) plus i won't tell it's you ...... this is a long message but still :) keep writing you amazing !!!