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since I'm online and planning out the next chapter of Lost, lemme explain some comments I've seen since rereading Gone.
1. Hazel is NOT white. I actually had a set face for her in mind, but she is mixed race - Black and German. that also explains Hazel's ability to speak German the night of her second assault.
2. yes, I'm aware that Chapter 10 of Gone is not consensual from a reader point of view. yes, I'm aware that half of the shit done for initiation/the concept of the comfort girls and runners in general is something to be frowned upon. that is (sadly) the point. it's not condoned, but that's how it is.
3. I never finished Gone and provided an explanation and just moved straight on to Lost, but don't worry, I'll be filling in the gaps throughout the chapters of Lost. I'm very slow moving when it comes to writing, but since the ending of this story has been brewing on my mind for over three years since writing Gone, I know what's going to happen, what happens to everyone, how it ends, all of it. just give it time. my attention is placed elsewhere these days, so putting out decent chapters that are a million times better than the crap I wrote as a young teen is taking me MONTHS. again, I'm sorry!!
and I think that's everything I've been meaning to address? those are just a few of the things I've seen while making an effort to write. if there's any other confusions, feel free to shoot me a message - I get everything from here sent to my emails on my phone, so I see everything, lol. chapter three of Lost is on the way though, so hang tight and keep reading Acid and Gone to refresh your memories (although those stories are TRASH to me now)!!