Raival904
Hey Nacolito, I was wondering since it appears that you have discontinued your Osea on Earth story… I want to know if I could adopt it and heavily revise it. I can write pretty well and can do a better job telling the story you wanted to tell and share.
nacolitomahawk
@ Raival904 you can do whatever you wanted with it, I will give you the permission. Honestly speaking, it was written when I was 10th grade with terrible English, so I wanted it to be rewritten for a long time, but lacked time to
Raival904
Trust me, I like the premise and idea of it, but it seems poorly handled and not properly written with proper grammar, detail, and spelling.