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Hello, I'm writing a story, if you could read it I would appreciate it. ( if u want ofc) Thank u and have a nice day ! 

Hi I wants to recommend this book
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/157471880?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=jamesattard84&wp_originator=TVU1O%2BrdztqnBKColWysb2OlGayYtNuyj24%2BP38IYHEtX4KeIkzj%2F9iX7K3yI9%2F%2B%2B8p%2F63LzbluX1X9ZeE8iv%2FW%2FmkSZvz8OGYqBu4y9nIBgrIJ5%2BlS2%2BSk9O2QKi1lV

Hi! I published my mafia book, The Underworld. I'd love to know your thoughts about it (:
          
          Any feedback helps for when I'm editing and improving my writing.
          https://my.w.tt/3AuQUZ6FRcb