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If you want your book reviewed PM me, here is my Critique Layout:
1) Story: Quality of the story, is the story interesting? Did it make me want to read on to the next chapter? Did it flow well? any comments on the plot?
2) Characters: Are the characters interesting? Believable? Relatable? Do I want to know more about this character? Have I been told too much about the character?
3) Spelling/Grammars: Example of some grammar level. What level do u write in? High school, college and professional level?
4) Improvements: How can this chapter be better?
5) Positive Reinforcement: What did you do perfectly. What I loved most about this story/Chapter. Some encouragements.
The payment is an simple fallow or a honest comment on one of my books.
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My books will be on hold, for me to write and edit them thoroughly. Once I feel satisfied with my chapters I will post them!
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