Why u wanna know :P

could you critique the first chapter of my story called no, I don't believe in magic. I know there's a bunch of mistakes.

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A chapter has been uploaded for Dark Memories, Light Future! Please check it out and vote! Thank you so much! http://www.wattpad.com/71115637-dark-memories-light-future-rewritten-chapter/page/2?d=ud

@Princesstori16 I am good and me too The new layout is annoying... :(

@Princesstori16 Hey! How are you?

@TheChipmonk Yea, it is! I dont know how I feel about it! They will! Just wait!

@TheChipmonk I logged on my account and it said. Do you want the new layout and I said yes. LOL it was random!

Hey guys! I have just posted a short story, To Be Saved. I would really appreciate if you guys can gave it a read and gave me your honest feedback! Thanks in advance!

Ello Girly!

Hey all! I have updated Dark Memories, Light Future! Be sure to check it out! 
          http://www.wattpad.com/70061734-dark-memories-light-future-rewritten-chapter-two~