Colorful_lion1122

Hi I would like to make a few suggestion for “The Alphas Vampire” I was wondering whenever a person starts speaking in the book if you could put quotations marks 
          That would make it so much easier identifying when a character is talking and it would be wonderful if you could maybe add some paragraphs because one long paragraph is very unsettling on the eyes And I don’t mean to criticize you by any means these are just suggestions that I’m  offering  and would really like if you could add them to your book anyways I really love your book please keep writing and continue making amazing pieces of literature