Nivi

https://www.wattpad.com/story/389786705?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=itz_beautifulgurlll
          
          Hey author..
          Give her book a chance I am sure you will love it she is writing really very well u just want to support her ❤️

Hello!

HEY GUYS ,back after long please read my new story AgniBela when you loveliess have time ♥️

If you like romance novels, please check out my book “Stay”. It is a college romance set in Bangalore. The main characters are Malayali.
          
          It’s a light and airy, bad boy meets nerdy good girl kinda story. Friendship, Love, drama. 
          
          I hope you give this a chance and enjoy it! 
          
          It has a sequel- “Stay Mine”. This is slightly darker. Check out one or both and let me know your thoughts. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/347470424?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=faizadreamland&wp_originator=1UHt8VY4NXqb7u5jx%2FEOUW0uzTNZfbiyTxVcVXJkucXXgxR%2BNQ4Zy%2BqzEH6PhXTt7rmym8UD4RrmkbrKPKcwGZqBYgovgQziHd%2FBRuFJZfqLbiI7JIoTxHmSuMnZ8eUu

Leaving wattpad :)

Hey! We're two Indian, amateur, budding writers. We just started to publish a new story 'Bewitched Hearts'. Please do check it out. Hoping that you would like it and find it interesting. We'll be waiting for your opinion.
          
          
          Also, do vote and follow us and add our book your reading list to show support to keep us going. 
          
          Thank you!❤
          
          
          https://my.w.tt/uswHe39fx8

Hey dear ❤️
          Hope you are having a safe quarantine.
          
          Please do check out my recent work MISFIT. It's a story about an Indian teenaged girl. It would mean a lot if you could give it a try.
          
          https://my.w.tt/EElWOh4nl6
          
          Have a great day ❤️ 

i swear, i wasn't staring at my shauhar up there in your icon for minutes. i really wasn't.

stop killing me with your profile picture and background ! ! ! 

So since you personally asked me to read your book, I gladly gave it a read since it was so sweet, simple and short. I hope you wont mind a little bit of constructive criticism and will take it in a positive way.
          I think if you keep rereading your own chapters to spot out all sorts of grammatical errors, related to tense, voice and speech you can take this far! Also, maybe make the dialogues between the characters sound their age? Since you have a beautiful concept It'll all be worth it. 
          Thank you. 
          I hope you ljke my book .