ollieismybaby
Hehehe guess whos getting bratty Holly next part, idk why but I’m loving her brat side since we never really see it
ollieismybaby
ollieismybaby
So who’d be down for a the summer I turned pretty fic?
Either an older fisher kid played by Cailee Spaney or the youngest Fisher kid played by Frankie Corio?
(I watched the Beef season two and idk I just saw something)
ollieismybaby
So guys I think I might post the intro for Drag Path today or tomorrow but I honestly want to keep it as realistic and not out of character as possible so please when I do post it, please be honest if anything or anyone doesn’t seem or feel right
ollieismybaby
I am also writing Wallflower during this but it’s easy to just rewrite from docs then it is fully coming up with the new part so I just write it on here in between working on Wallflower
ollieismybaby
Why tf is Robby so hot, I just saw a edit and I think I like actually blushed. Gotta love my mentally unwell men
ollieismybaby
@Musicpotterhead lol, yeah honestly I can’t pick between abbot and Robby sooo but yeah it’s the one downside to family stories, afterwards you can’t help kinda seeing them in a paternal sense
Musicpotterhead
@ollieismybaby I was gonna say I'm more of team Abbott and then I saw your second message and I regretted my thoughts
ollieismybaby
You know I posted this then immediately felt gross cause i try to put myself in Holly shoes when I write and now I feel like I just said my dad is hot
ollieismybaby
I’m trying so hard to write the next part of wallflower but it’s so hard for some reason, I hate writers block
ollieismybaby
@KochoShinobuko224 it really does suck cause I love updating and seeing everyone’s comments but I gotta have both Robby and Dana getting a little mad the next part and I’m trying so hard to keep them realistic but it’s tough. But thank you for the advice cause after your comments and advice, I actually started rough drafting the next part so yay :)
KochoShinobuko224
@ollieismybaby aw babes, don't rushhh. it's okay, if you don't feel like updating no need to force yourself for us^°^ if you want some ideas, maybe try and search for some ideas online! Maybe try some quotes that's resemble the situation or something like that. I do that when I get an artist block, it helps for me at least^^
Musicpotterhead
@ollieismybaby Don't give up, it's gonna come, just need a bit of time. Sometimes it's just comes like that. Don't worry, we'll wait ;)
ollieismybaby
How would you guys feel if I dropped another The Pitt fanfic?
I feel like some of yall are just like can you just update wallflower please
ollieismybaby
@paradiseonearth1123 thank you baby, I probably wouldn’t have posted it without your comment so thank you
ollieismybaby
@Musicpotterhead I literally love you, thanks for making me actually want to post it:)
ollieismybaby
So I have a question, please leave honest feedback but I feel like the last part was too long and too much to follow so I was wondering if yall agree next time, maybe do the next parts a little more shorter? Idk let me know what yall think and then I’ll start writing the next part
Musicpotterhead
@ollieismybaby I mean I love long parts, when I write it's usually very long chapters. I think it's more about how much stuff you try to put it one. Like there shouldn't be too much stuff but there still should be some so the reader doesn't get tired. I don't know if I make sense. Anyway, I don't remember thinking the last chapter was too long. But I think if you make them shorter, maybe it'll be easier for you, like less pressure to post and all?
ollieismybaby
That would mean that probably there’d be more chapters per hour but I think it would be easier to read?
ollieismybaby
Before I drop this, would anyone read a Challengers fic, or should I just keep it for myself?
ollieismybaby
So next part is almost completely written but normally I add the part to Wattpad while I write but this time I didn’t so this might take a little bit longer then normal to rewrite on here
ollieismybaby
So I am writing a small Harry and Holly scene and I will say if Holly seems a little out of character I think when she has a crush, she kinda acts more childish (really it’s more shes just acting her age) but I think it’s sweet but just little warning if she feel out of character.