Hi, guys, this is my first BL book ever. Please let me know what you think. I will gladly take into account any advice, whether it is positive or negative. Also please forgive me for my poor English vocabulary. I usually write in Spanish; this is my first attempt at writing in English. English is not my first language but my fourth, but I promise to improve it.
Please, please don't forget to vote for me. I'll be updating the next chapter soon and will do it faster if you ask me for it. That will bust my happiness; it means my readers like my book.