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Pablo's final chapter of Dead Weight has been published! :)
          
          Now we're getting somewhere!

Excerpt from the upcoming update on Sunday:
          
          Dead Weight IIII (On my way)
          
          
          "I said, gently!"
          
          "I got it!" Pablo huffed, setting the barrel down carefully. Too carefully. Didn't know why he was treating Garrett's wooden harem like porcelain.
          
          He stood up straight, but it took effort. Noodles would make better appendages than these floppy arms and legs. Just need to sit, or roll over and die. At least he'd make a useful paperweight.
          

All 3 chapters of The Other Side chapters updated/published.
          
          That was a trip. Hopefully they do The Girl some justice.
          
          Can finally get to some new chapters next week. 
          
          Pablo’s last dead weight chapter drops 11/23.
          
          Thank you for reading! 

I did myself in with my chapters yall—
          
          The Other Side will be 3 chapters, so that’s 3 chapters in one week, and it usually takes one week to write a chapter because of all the rereading and editing I do before publishing.
          
          I’m starting with a blank page just like I did with my other rewrites. Same scene, same setting and characters, anything important that was an action is still included with maybe a little more added, different pacing and movement. 
          
          I’m still working on chapter 3, but this rewrite has not left me a lot of time for editing.
          
          I will do my best, and something will definitely be published on 11/16, whether it is the 3rd chapter of the Other Side sequence, A chapter split of the 3rd Miles Apart chapter, or the last Dead Weight chapter to finally finish Pablo’s sequence!
          
          Thanks for sticking with the story through all of the chapter splits and rewrites.
          

Change of plans...
          
          Since I don't want The Girl's voice to sound too inconsistent for long, I'll be updating the Girl's, If I Stop, on Sunday 11/9. 
          
          On 11/16, instead of publishing Pablo's final Dead Weight chapter, I'll be publishing a revision of The Girl's chapter, The Other Side.
          
          New chapters will be published consistently from 11/23 + every Sunday.
          
          Writing takes time and although the setting and theme is the same for revisions, I'm doing a whole whopping rewrite. The Girl's If I stop will become 2 chapters. 
          The Other Side may become 3.
          
          Thank you for your patience!

Finally, about halfway through 'Before the Fire'.
          
          I appreciate all the patience as I've been on an alternating schedule, revising previous chapters and uploading new ones. My goal has been to introduce something new and keep readers interested. The publications weren't exactly doing the work, so I'm just trying to make it better until it grabs. :) 
          
          I'll be done with revisions (hopefully) once The Girl's chapters are written to my liking.
          
          Miles Apart's revision was published this past weekend, along with Pablo's new chapter, 'In the Dark'.
          
          Next week I will be publishing a revision of the first chapter, "The Girl's If I Stop."
          
          11/16 the final Dead Weight chapter will be published. 
          
          11/23 the Girl's The Other Side will have a new published revision. 
          
          Then it's all new chapters from there. 
          
          'Before the Fire' will be nearing its end. 
          
          
          Thank you for reading!

Pablo's promo releases on Sunday. His POV is unfiltered, so it's a lot of fun to write. But so exhausting.
          
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          "Pablo plowed his clammy face onto his pillow. Soft linen, cotton trim, stuffed with feathers and fluff. A f***ing scouring pad. He rolled over, clutching his sheet tightly around himself. His head still pounding from the liquid he didn't sleep off. There was a word for this. 
          mother-ducking, dock-sucking Regret.
          
          "Pablo! You awake?" From just outside his tent. 
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HI all~ 
          Locus is still forward-moving. ~ Didn't think I'd be able to keep up the weekly pace, but here it is. 
          
          That being said, I have some fairly lengthy chapters, and I've decided to alternate between splitting them and publishing new ones until they're all a bit more readable. 
          
          This also gives me time to revise voice in previous chapters for consistency. 
          
          The next update will be a split for Miles Apart.  Miles Apart may end up being three parts.
          
          Pablo's part is next, and I'm excited to share his colorful, unfiltered voice.

Locus  Prologue 'Miles Apart' part 2 releases today.
          
          Things are a little messy in his love life, but dangit Miles, you're on an important mission! 
          
          He could use a nice hot cup of tea and or a giant tub of ice cream. 
          But it's probably more likely he'll be getting the torch and pitch fork treatment.
          
          Stay tuned for the update~

Finally! 
          
          Locus launched today,
          A republishing of Inherited:Rebirth. 
          
          It only took some mild headaches, sobbing and editing for the hundredth time that I decided it was time to close my eyes, publish and let it fly! 
          
          Only prologue part 1 is out right now, but part 2 will be ready for publishing next week, and continue where part 1 leaves off.
          
          Get to know The girl with no name, and Miles as one of them overcomes life threatening obstacles, and the other… digs their own grave.
          
          More to come :)