@deathshadow -grins- Well, I haven't started on the next chapter yet as I've been pretty busy with other stuff like school and looking for a job. In fact, today I need to dye my green hair back to brown so I'll have better luck getting one. . . but hon, it doesn't matter if you're 14, 24 or 54. You can write very well, and you have a really great talent for it! Just keep working at it, and you'll be a great author up there with Anne Rice and Poe.
Anyway, I've written a short Halloween story and posted it. It's called "Hallows Eve", and is one part of a series of short Halloween stories I plan to write in the upcoming week. I have an idea for another few parts for the series, but I need to sort them out first. :p