dinasourrawrrawr
cann you plsss update silence
pandu1903
Moondazze
Dear author, I started reading your story " My evil alpha husband. I read your warning at the beginning of this story having a lot of angust however there was no warning about BDSM nor Domestic abuse or such. This is NOT a story for me!!! I would have appreciated having that warning as well at the beginning. NOTE: I like your writing style but not the abuse and such parts. Please add in those warnings at the beginning. THANK YOU
Kissamielinen
Dear Writer!
I just got to the end of "My Evil Alpha Husband". I confess to you that I don't remember that a story has ever made me feel so strongly. The choice of topic is bold, the implementation is brutal but excellent work.
After a while, I tried to rename Phayu and Rain while reading, because I was afraid that I would permanently hate Phayu, whom I adore in LITA. As I saw and read, the story forced every reader on a strong emotional roller coaster. I literally could have killed Phayu.
The story is terrible. It's not your work that's terrible, it's the story you've told.
The son of a monster father has become a monster himself, committing terrible crimes against the one he is supposed to love and protect. There's no violence he hasn't committed against Rain, except for murder, but practically, he almost killed the boy's soul. Physical and mental abuse, cruel treatment, humiliation, rape... If it wasn't for P'Pai, Sky and their family, it would have been the same. The special tragedy of the whole thing is that Rain knew from the beginning that Phayu was his Alpha.
When Phayu started to realize what Rain really does and means to her... In reality, this marriage and relationship could not be saved. Phayu cannot be excused by his past, what he did cannot be forgiven. I feel sorry for the child who was Phayu, my heart bleeds for him. But grown-up Phayu is indeed what Rain said. Not a strong Alpha, just a cruel Alpha.
In addition, I am glad that the end of the story was basically positive.
Congratulations again. It is also a wonderful creation in its horror.
Kissamielinen
@pandu1903 The story made me think so much that my psychiatrist and I talked about it (I'm not crazy), and I recommended the doctor to read it. The doctor was very interested in the story and the relationship between Phayu and Rain, the impact of Phayu's childhood on the development of Phayu's personality, and when I told her about the story, she tried to diagnose Phayu and Rain's condition based on this. I have to say that, according to the doctor, Phayu needed long therapy and great willpower to overcome the toxic influence of his father, to actually be able to change, to dare to trust his partner and himself. Although according to the doctor, such a success is rare in similar cases, but it can happen. Thank you for writing and sharing this story with us. Really terrible story, but great writing. Thank You again and again.
Kissamielinen
@pandu1903 Dear pandu1903! Your story is very powerful. You can be very, very proud of yourself, because you wrote the story very bravely, yet sensitively. I've read it twice so far and it's become one of my favorites. The whole article is very thought-provoking. And I think I will read it again and again, of course not immediately. Of course, I didn't hate Phayu, and I'm glad that the story ended on a positive note. I honestly admit that I hated Phayu for a part of the story, but as the story progressed and I started to understand the things that happened in the past, I already felt sorry for him, and then I felt proud for both of them. I was extremely happy that Phayu was able to see what kind of person his father was, what he did to him, and what kind of person he became because of his father. And he was ready to do anything to change. I'm glad that both of them found the strength within themselves, both of them changed, and their souls, their relationship, and their entire personalities came into balance. And indeed they became fate mates. Rain also became a very strong personality, in fact he became a dominant Omega, and despite the things he suffered, he was willing to mentally support Phayu's therapy. The alternate ending would have been horrible. Tó be continued...
pandu1903
@Kissamielinen Well... Thank you so much. This means a lot to me. I am glad I could make you feel the emotions. I am sorry that it made you feel so strongly against Phayu... And also, a teeny teeny bit proud? I am really grateful for the love you have shown. Thank you so much!
pandu1903
Hello dear readers.
This account will be inactive for a while due to some personal reasons. I never thought this would happen but I am sorry. I will try to comeback as soon as I recover.
Hope you understand. I am truly sorry.
pandu1903
@pandu1903 Thank you for the support❤. It really means a lot. And I am back! I will post regularly from now.
pandu1903
The next chapter of Silence is out! Do check it out.
Notifications are not working for some people, so I am announcing it here.
pandu1903
Hello!! How are you all?
Well... I am back with another angst story of Phayurain titled " All mine"
It is a different genre from my other stories and I have tried my best. Please do check it out.
And about my current story "Silence", it will be mostly updated by tomorrow.
Thank you for having so much patience with my very irregular updating schedule!
I love you all so much!!
The link to the new story is below.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/367577554?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=pandu1903
pandu1903
@pandu1903 Hello, dear! Thank you for liking the story and for the continuous support you give for each of the stories of mine. I am grateful for that. And please, go ahead with the translations. Love you so much❤
lor_aa30
@ pandu1903 Hello, my dear. I liked the new story. It is wonderful. It moved my emotions greatly. It was painful for Rain... I hope this story has a happy ending.... And in the end, it seems that I loved it very much.... I think I should translate it later. If you would give me permission to do so, I would be very grateful...love you ❤️❤️
jeffearix
Hey gurlll!!!!!!!! Thanks for considering my request and write chapter 3 epilogue....ummm...i dont know if i should ask you that but..you remember you give a part in epilogue 4 which phayu punished rain for distracting him during work.
Ummmm....can you write that part where rain pleasure himself sitting Infront oh phayu. And also what happen to his mom later...
MichaelaCruz737
What happened to My Evil Alpha Husband?? Failed to load every time I opened it
pandu1903
@MichaelaCruz737 I checked it. It is working fine. Try deleting the app history and try. If not, I will reupload again
pandu1903
Hello!!
Sorry for the last week
I came to my sister's place for a ceremony and her is not leaving me alone for a minute.
And with all the relatives coming, I couldn't find time to update any chapter. I am so sorry for that.
I will try to update Silence by tonight. Tonight in the sense after midnight.
And.... Another Good news!
I am planning to extend the two shot "You are my destiny" To another 1 or 2 chapters.
Tell me if you would like it or not.
And also... Another epilogue for @noeulleeckm and then also the alternate ending for it.
I also have 2 one or two shots in mind.
So.. Let's see.
You guys must have known how bad I am at managing my time... So hope for the best
Thank you for the love, support and patience❤
Love you guys!! ❤
pandu1903
@nijirochinderlla I will do it tonight. I was supposed to upload it yesterday, but I had to make a few changes. Sorry for the delay
lor_aa30
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We want a second part with the monster phayu fucking Rain With his rut please .... I'm looking forward to that