@pbdosa
Hey, dudette, I just wanted to give you a shout-out because I keep coming across your reviews on fantasy stories that I'm also doing R4R with, and you have an extremely kind and clever way of helping authors see places/ways to go deeper with their details and descriptions simply by asking good questions like "I wonder what rain reminds this character of?" Way to go, you!!
All those identifying as womxn, go ahead and put up your work here: https://www.wattpad.com/story/227264641-the-fendi-awards-edition-1
Chapter 5 of God Killer is out! I'm experimenting with active voice a little more, let me know how it sounds :D
NEED AN UPDATE!!!
@ShivSstories Hahaha, oh my goodness, I feel so honored to have received this demand <3 I appreciate you. I promise I'll have the next chapter out this week! (Assuming I don't get caught up doing like a million edits, which is only possible thanks to all my awesome feedback givers like you)
Chapter 7 of Return and Chapter 4 of God Killer is out! Give it a read, and let me know what you think.
@DPaperPlane thank you! For sure, happy to do a read for read!
Chapter 6 of Return is out! Let me know what you think :)
I've made some pretty big updates to God Killer based on peer feedback. Thanks to @Bobby_Blueboy and @VeraAnneWolf for taking the time to review it and providing constructive feedback.
Chapter 5 of Return is out!
I've also started a new novella called God Killer - it's fantasy inspired by Indian mythology. Give it a read and let me know what your thoughts are!
Will definitely read both ! Just going to bed now super tired ! But I’ll definitely continue with Return and read God Killer :D
Hey there ! Thank sooo much for all your in depth critic and feedback ❤️❤️ it was amazing to receive and I will definitely try improve on all the points you have made as they were all valid You’re a great editor by the way
Not at all ! All the points you made were extremely valid ! Thank you soo much for the amazing feedback once again ! ❤️❤️
@Bobby_Blueboy Aww that's really kind of you to say! <3 Let me know anytime if you have questions or clarifications on it. My hope with this feedback is that it's only serving as guidance, so if you ever feel like there was some point I made that doesn't make sense, don't take it. I would rather you trust your artist/writers instinct when it feels right for you! Keep writing :)