pbhoeme

@MidnightPoison Okay, I will definitely work on that! thanks ALOT for checking it out!! I just put part two up, so if you're still interested I'd love to see what you think of the second chapter!
          	And I will definitely read your work! :)

lottielovesyou

Hey Brooke :)
          I'm sorry I haven't messaged you recently, I haven't been around! I just stopped by to say I've uploaded Love Sucks - 25.. if you've got that far, haha xD
          Hope you like it!
          Anyways, when are you updating "And I Love You, Too" ? =3
          
          Lottie
          =D x

Deep4141

Hi, how’s it going?
          
          So sorry for the delay in updating my story………I had assignments to complete. I uploaded Chapters 6 and 7 of my story "Die Another Death: The Underworld relocated.........right into my town !!!" . I would very much like it if u could read them and comment on it. Feel free to criticize, point out typos and so on. If u like it, maybe u could vote for it and fan me !!! ;-))  I will take out time to read your works !!!  Thanks in advance !!!   ;-)  ;-)  Here's the link to my story chapters- 
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/535720-die-another-death-the-underworld-relocated-right 
          http://www.wattpad.com/535804-die-another-death-the-underworld-relocated-right

lottielovesyou

Thank you for commenting, it means a lot to me :] !
          I'm still deciding what to do with the first two chapters, maybe re-write them in Cathy's POV (the girl whose POV I write from now) but with the same information... I'm going to ask some people and see what they think xD 
          I'll go check it out now, thanks!

lottielovesyou

Yeah, it is pretty hard to advertise your story but all you have to do is send a message to quite a few people you find on here, and hopefully they'll come read. Most of them do, because they're nice and all that, but that's how I got started xD
          That's no problem, I really enjoyed it.
          M story got off to a bad start in the next two chapters, I know, but I'm debating whether or not to re-write them. I don't know, but you can skip past them two if you like to chapter three cos that's kinda a start xD 
          Oh god, I sound demanding. sorry :T
          I'm just gonna shut up and go read your uploads now :P x

HappyBerry

Ahaha, thank you for reading my profile, and acknowledging my "Do Nots," that just instantly made me want to reply back to you.
          
          The onyl reason why I put no fantasy is because usually the stories I read are not well put together and are a mix of fairy tale crap, (no offence) although you's sounds promising. Unfortunately at th emoment I'm taking a summer course which is taking up most of my time, but I'm finished by the end of this week (ah finally) but I also have a whole bunch of reading requests which I promised to do... and I have to edit/beta peoples works.
          
          
          Sincerely though, I am greatly interested, please send me a private message with the title of your story again, and I will definately get back to you. 99.9% of the time, I leave a comment, even if it's the most horrible thing I've read, I think that all true writers deserve a review, to improve or to appreciate and be proud of their work. When I do, please don't take it personally if I don't like it, I will honsetly tell you what I like if I do like it, and will vote and fan you if you hit the mark for me. (:
          
          Good luck!  Oh, I'd also like to say, you made it to the whats hot list! Congrats!!!
          Iwas on that list actually, number #100 or something, here's some advice for you. Upload quickly, reply to comments, advertise and keep the flow, you'll  gain ranking almost instantly and than you don't have to do anything once you're down to 50 and under. I.... fell off the list when my summer course started :( didn't have time to keep up with my activity on wattpad (sigh)
          
          HappyBerry

Nunatak

Hello there, Brooke, 
          
          I know what you're thinking, "Oh great . . . another boring, annoying request," right? I won't deny that this probably is annoying, but I would also like to say that I would gladly return the favor, and give you a decent, thoughtful, constructive, review with honest feedback! 
          Anyways, I'm new to Wattpad, but I'm pretty familiar with the dynamics of the site already, and I can say (or hope, at least) that my characters are not Mary/Gary Sues, and my plot is not a rehash of trashy things! xD
          
          Synopsis "Grimminally Ever After": 
          
          Affluence? Gone.
          Living apparatus? Gone.
          Multi-million corporate inheritance? Gone.
          Legacy and all dignified reputation? Gone.
          Only people that ever cared about his existence? Gone, by society's definition.
          
          Welcome to the life of former Wall Street-mastermind-in-the-making and ex-Manhattan socialite, Lion du Moreau--whose most current business deals involve having his one saving grace of a plan thwarted, and his parents . . . something too painful for him to even talk about, oh, and the tiny transaction wouldn't be complete without the last zero at the end, called "migrating to an obscure village no one knows about with idiotic idealists for adoptive parents." Lasthaven's the strangest place in the world, where the the residents are hardly even sane, for the most part, or even physiologically credible! Lion is forced to take on a job he has absolutely no experience in, or even doesn't resent, but in life, you don't get what you want. Join this strangely determined careerist on his thrilling journey of cracking logic-defying cases, all the while dealing with depression attacks,and having every principle he ever stood by put to the test, as well as the most aggravating, pseudo-sadistic, mentally unstable, yet lovably and hatefully ingenious partner known in case-closing history!
          -Solfatara
          P.S. Wow! Lots of sports! Good job for being athletic! xDD I can't; I suck bad at everything besides swimming. xD