Light Yagami

I need constructive criticism. Any tips on how to write sex scenes? I can’t fucking do it without it feeling super awkward. Also need criticism on my transitions between chapters.

Hey there again, I don’t really know what I’m doing here. But I’d like to experiment more with my writing and wanted to see if anyone had any ideas for me or is willing to review my work with constructive criticism and feedback please. Thanks for reading

Idk why 5 ppl are following me but hi there, its been a while since I’ve even logged into wattpad. I took down a lot of things I had posted up because I gagged looking at it. If anyone is still even actively using wattpad, would anyone like a more up to date artbook or should I just throw out some ideas I have?