pedrxx231

Guys, I changed y/n's age to 7 years old so that it would fit better in the story.

Markking43

Hey you should add this for the forsaken: you should add a room for y/n that the girls hidden from him and they decide to check it out and it had all different version of all there stuff like for Jane and double sided axe,.guest 1337 brass knuckles, Jannifer two sword divne sword and necroblox sword, and for dusekkar different types of magicbook like:ice,water, earth,,fire, dark,air, light, time. For the stuff I said for magic for dusekkar I got from a Roblox game called magic powers tycoon. Good job by the way 

Markking43

Oh and for Veronica and tattoo skateboard with a demon lord on the bottom and a god on top
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acenoma

good stories friend

acenoma

@ pedrxx231  Okay, I hope you recover.
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pedrxx231

@ acenoma  Thanks for liking the stories, bro. I'm taking a break because I had a headache and also because my classes started, but I promise to come back to writing chapters someday.
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