pinkm8n

Ahhhh I love this !!! Buttt not trying to be rude I promise but as a reader I notice a pattern where you repeat the same thing like in chapter 11 where u mentioned three times that a few hair strands escaped her bun or when u kept saying she folded her arm. Don’t get me wrong I LOVE THE STORY it’s just the little things that make the difference. Anyways sorry if this came out the wrong way ly 

i need more now diva ☹️☹️

come back queeennn 

is there a way to download this story to my kobo

i’m OBSESSED with your stories and was actually blown away when you said your first language isn’t englisch, so impressive! 

I'm so surprised that English isn't your mother language, like what?? you're so good at writing, PLEASE continue!!

Girl love the story I really cant wait for the new chapterrrr

I like your story, but as someone whose mother language isnt english i find it kinda hard to read it :)

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