@cloudyinsummer the most important thing is to have the story be unique try to connect with the reader's. so far your story is great. Also when you don't know what to write just go out and find some inspiration and I would love to help☺ xx
@cloudyinsummer hi Nath I just read your book it is extremely well written I love the plot, the English grammer is perfect its so well written and I don't think you need help but if you do just dm me or something and I will help as best I can