dawg i hate when the author makes the mc talk all big and stuff and then make them weak as shi bro. like its kinda embarrassing with they get their ass beat after talking like theyre all that. i dont mind if ur mc has a “limit” but making them talk all that and then they lose is crazy to me brah. thanks for coming to my ted talk lil bro
ive been crying for the last hour cause i just read this masterpiece of a story that HAD A BAD ENDING?? like dawg how are u gonna leave me like this. what am i supposed to do with my life?? the ending was so empty bro.