Turmalina

My name is Emad from Yemen, and this is my first short story written in English. I hope you like it, and I would appreciate your feedback if possible.
          I would be happy about that.
          Thank you in advance.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/399811046?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=user51589090