SharadKumarSingh

Hey there!
          
          I like the way you depicted the changes that happened to Naomi after the incident. 
          
          I would keep following your work so don't leave me on a cliffhanger alright?
          
          If you don't mind, can you check out my work as well? I need some critique as it's my first time writing.
          
          Thanks!

pokepop0

Thank you, you are my first person to comment on my story, thank you for the feedback and I will continue working on the story. And I will go look at your work. I just need some time to think of my story a bit more and it is also my first time writing but I will not leave you on a cliffhanger :)
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