porcha2468

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Just finished the full re-edit of Ashes of the Alpha.
          	The original version was a chaotic mess of timeline jumps, plot holes, and “why the fuck is this character alive again” moments. I fixed all of it.
          	It’s now actually readable, the story makes sense from start to finish, the characters are consistent, and yes… there is proper smut.
          	If you suffered through the old version, I’m sorry. You’re free now. Go read the fixed one.
          	❤️❤️❤️

porcha2468

este mensaje puede ser ofensivo 
Just finished the full re-edit of Ashes of the Alpha.
          The original version was a chaotic mess of timeline jumps, plot holes, and “why the fuck is this character alive again” moments. I fixed all of it.
          It’s now actually readable, the story makes sense from start to finish, the characters are consistent, and yes… there is proper smut.
          If you suffered through the old version, I’m sorry. You’re free now. Go read the fixed one.
          ❤️❤️❤️

SkyAzulLopez

Hello, Author. The book is good but maybe you could try rearranging the chapters to follow a better sequencing. This way the readers are not confused which chapter should go after next. Otherwise, the plot is very good. Thank.

porcha2468

Hey! sorry for the late reply!
            Yeah the original version was a complete mess timeline-wise. I’ve fully re-edited the whole thing so the chapters actually follow each other properly now.
            It’s cleaner, makes sense, and yes… there are proper smut scenes this time.
            Go give it another try if you want. Should be way less confusing (and way more fun).
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VanessaLivInTheSky

Hey I have a few questions about ashes of the alpha, can I ask or is it not okay?
          
          Sorry for my bad English, texting ist not my strong suit in a different language ❤️

porcha2468

@VanessaLivInTheSky Thank you so much for your kind words and for being so patient. I just want to say you weren’t being disrespectful at all—I really appreciate your thoughtful comments. Some of the gaps are intentional, to build atmosphere and keep a sense of mystery, but I did write it fast, so there are still some loopholes. Soon, I’ll go back and revise everything, and if you notice anything else that could help, please feel free to message me. I’m really grateful for your support!
            
            Also, I want to be honest—some of the gaps or odd transitions might not have been as intentional as they seemed; they could have just been mistakes. I’m going to carefully edit those parts, and I hope you’ll give the book a second chance as I continue revising.❤️
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VanessaLivInTheSky

@porcha2468 And please tell me if that's too disrespectful. If so, I'd be very happy to apologize.❤️
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VanessaLivInTheSky

@porcha2468 Hey girl, don't worry, I'm so grateful you even replied. I think your book is really well written. It's just a little confusing in places because it feels like you've skipped a chapter or two. Is there a specific reason for that? Or is it intentional? I'm just curious so I can get a better idea of ​​how I see and read the book. I saw that it hasn't been edited yet and is the first draft, like you said. I'm just really curious if it's intentional and meant to be interpreted in some way. Have a great day and please don't let anyone else upset you ❤️
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