porcha2468

@VanessaLivInTheSky Thank you so much for your kind words and for being so patient. I just want to say you weren’t being disrespectful at all—I really appreciate your thoughtful comments. Some of the gaps are intentional, to build atmosphere and keep a sense of mystery, but I did write it fast, so there are still some loopholes. Soon, I’ll go back and revise everything, and if you notice anything else that could help, please feel free to message me. I’m really grateful for your support!
            
            Also, I want to be honest—some of the gaps or odd transitions might not have been as intentional as they seemed; they could have just been mistakes. I’m going to carefully edit those parts, and I hope you’ll give the book a second chance as I continue revising.❤️

@porcha2468 And please tell me if that's too disrespectful. If so, I'd be very happy to apologize.❤️

@porcha2468 Hey girl, don't worry, I'm so grateful you even replied. I think your book is really well written. It's just a little confusing in places because it feels like you've skipped a chapter or two. Is there a specific reason for that? Or is it intentional? I'm just curious so I can get a better idea of ​​how I see and read the book. I saw that it hasn't been edited yet and is the first draft, like you said. I'm just really curious if it's intentional and meant to be interpreted in some way. Have a great day and please don't let anyone else upset you ❤️