Molly

Your main book was last updated on my birthday
          

Please make keeley forgive talon for his actions. Make them come back together. & you should make it whose talking. Cuz I don't get it when there's a narrator telling the story it's kinda confusing. Make them come back together. Probably at the homecoming dance.

Aww The cell phone swap is gonna end soon :( 

I also got really confused who was telling the story. It was better when 
          " Blah, blah, blah" talons said. I got lost of the 2 chapters. But I managed to get it. (Kinda) 

You should really get talon & keels back together. Make it like talon was in a car accident then keels come to visit him at the hospital. Saying to forgive her. Then they come back together. Knowing they can't be separated. Idk. I'm just giving my thoughts on how to get them together. :)

I would really appreciate. If you read this book gave me your opinion. Tell if you like it or not. I won't judge you. It's just let me know if I need more improvements. My books name is " The boy who stole my heart "