prettygirlsluvdinero

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prettygirlsluvdinero

hey my new favorite people...bad news but some make take it as good news. Let's talk about chapter 5 that's upcoming. I might restart it ONLY because it's not how I want it. Like I wanna give y'all so much of Kelsey and Johnny but what I have written I feel like it's not enough. I just read another We Were Liars fiction and it was so good. I paid attention enough that I feel like I'm not showing and giving what the people want and I want. So with this being said It's gonna be a little longer then I planned. Only because I'm putting my very all in it. Not sitting around doing nothing do not worry. Also should I put all my chapters in 3rd person point of view. I could put that through AI so quick and have all the chapters republished fast?LMK. Anyways hugs and kisses!!

prettygirlsluvdinero

Hear me out. I'm going to try my best to have this out ASAP.  Every episode I split into 2 parts. So each of my chapters have the beginning of an episode and the next chapter Is the end of an episode. Chapter 5 Is gonna have to be put into one whole episode. That's the only way It will make sense. Anywaysss see you soon!!

prettygirlsluvdinero

Oh...It's late Chapter 3 out now

ashnickie6

okay thanks let me if you decide to finishing the story
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prettygirlsluvdinero

@ashnickie6 I'll think on it. I like the idea.
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ashnickie6

@prettygirlsluvdinero you can do a time jump in the future where the baby is born. they live together after they graduate hs. they can possibly get engage (where he propose to her) or get married because why not. it can be 2 more more chapters. make them where they’re are long not short where it don’t end quickly. something like one chapter can be her whole pregnancy where they find out the gender and end of that chapter she have the baby. the final chapter you know the conclusion of the story can be the time jump in the future where it would be the early 2000s because it already takes place in the mid 90s. I read this all in one night and it had a cliff hanger. I enjoy reading your story
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