Hello everyone! I've started a new book, it's around 50 pages and 25,000+ words on Google Docs, and I hope to turn it into a novel but I need some feedback, so I posted it here, if you would be so kindly as to read it please, also the chapters are from 2,000-9,000 words and the description is poorly written but it's 1:30am and I've been working on it for the past few hours, but if you could I'd love for you all to read it! Have nice day!