Hello! If you're into dialogue short stories, I suggest you my book, Rescue Call. I hope you give me a try. Even if not, no biggie. Thank you anyways ♥
@NWA_slim_shady hello there ! I did read your story. U have a really interesting plot there ! But a lot of editing is needed Bcz it gets confusion when it comes down to dialogues and whose saying what. U can do develop better I believe. And try to keep the suspense instead of writing everything. U can do better ! And that is a really good story alright. Keep the suspense about what really happened to Red and how she killed the kids ! Try to do better !