purplebubble

Thanks for fanning. I really hope you are enjoying the fantasies. :) You can be or look like anyone you want to but being a beautiful you is better then any pic you can find. 

Okay here it is:
          1) bedsheet
          2)..around my neck or sometimes use laser vision.. (don't use a comma)
          3)..all day waiting to be saved, I wanted to be... (combine the two sentences)
          4) Then I would imagine the Army lock down my territory as they destroyed it to shambles... (combine again)
          5) ..don't exist and no one..(remove comma)
          6) save the day...at least that's what I used to think, then I saw the mask.
          
          Okie dokes!! Goodluck writing! I'll check on your story when I'm free again and edit:)

@purplebubble Thanks for the comments! Um, what needs to be edited in the description? You can just message it to me if you want. 

@YuffieProductions Your story description has to be edited as well. I can't give a comment on it though cause it doesn't have a comment box on that part.

@YuffieProductions sure thing:)

@untamedbeauty sure thing:) karen_adrienne@yahoo.com.ph

I saw your forum post. Would you be willing to edit SuperHero for me? I don't want to send it over email, so could you do it on its story comments? 
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/story/1084584-superhero
          
          

i think i'll settle for email. i'm not done with the second chapter, i'll email u when it's done. My email is untamedbeauty4life@yahoo.com, u can just send me a blank email so i can get urs, or u just reply with ur email :)

@untamedbeauty Okay how do you want to do this? You can send the parts to my email and then I'll send it to you asap or you can get me to open your account and I'll edit it directly from your works. Whichever you decide is fine with me. :)

need an editor :)
          http://www.wattpad.com/story/1280499-the-feline-revenge