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racergirl5013
Nov 07, 2014 03:54AM
You should get the readers more attached to the old man at least I have the tragedy happen you just start at the grave stone so ha you have no reason to say that, I have my reader attached... god!View all Conversations
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The end of it all
A girl named Mackenzie who's mom was killed in the middle of a robbery at her house the cookie jar that had h...