rachelini

hey my two fans ;)
          	just letting you know, me and a couple friends started a story for fun as we were bored in class
          	hope you get a chance to read it
          	its called 'Crossing paths'
          	xxx

shewhofallsupstairs

hiya...i was wondering if you could read my story? its called carnival tricks...would you mind?? it would be great.... you dont have to comment or fan or vote or anything if you dont want to but constructive critisim would be great!!!
          thanks bye xxxxxxxxx

ZZara1001

Heyya, I was wondering would you be able to check out one of my stories please and if you can thankyouu:) oh nd one of them I am writing with two of my friends it's called 'she killed him' and from that name you can probably guess it's a horror oh and it's a humour too lol anyways thanks if you can:)

LunaSaintLaurent

Hii, I was wondering if you could take a look at my story.
          
          Storm.
          
          Summary: Something terrible happens to Leila, a beautiful 16 year old Japanese-Canadian girl, that forces her to leave the place she grew up in, Toronto, Ontario (Canada). Her parents decide for her to continue her high school studies in Japan. She hopes to start a new life in Tokyo, and at first, is successfully able to live a normal but boring life for the first time. She wants to forget Toronto and everything that happened there, but one day the encounterance of a group of strangers throws her back into her old memories. While struggling with the painful wound of her past that is reopened, she finds herself tangled up in a messy relationship with one particular member of the group, marking the beginning of a once again, complicated life in her new home, Tokyo.
          
          Teaser: Sometimes Jonathan hurts me so much I feel like I want to just jump over those black ochroid gates surrounding the rooftop and fall into the cement. But if I die and go to hell – a belief I hold certain – Jonathan won’t be there with me. I’d rather live and withstand the pain than be somewhere without Jonathan. Because without him, I experience the absolute absence of sensation.
          
          Here’s a little excerpt:
          My mind filled with images, everything before, leading up to, and The Actual Incident. The dire opening upon my chest I so carefully patched together felt like it was being tear open. The wetness in the corners of my eyes was starting to cloud my whole vision. I knew what was coming next, and I didn't want Jonathan to see it. "No, I can't. I'm sorry." The last word came out a bit unsteady. I hadn't intended it to. 
          
          I got up quickly, and a chill ran through my body as the warm mesh quilt slid off my body, puddling around my feet on the ground. I realized I had nothing on but a t-shirt which wasn't even mine and my undergarments. I wanted to question why, but I needed to leave right then before what I knew was going to come next came. I spotted my schoolbag near the door, and ran to pick it up on my way out.
          
          Thanks a million in advance!
          xoxo
          Penguin.

Damonh

hi!
          I'm Yna and i'm currently writing "Dangerous Prince: The Choice"... i hope you have free time to read it... please leave a comment there (I just want to know what you think about it... and if you liked it) or vote or become a fan...
          here are some of the lines from my story...
          
          "But I have said before that i don't like you!" Urgh! The last thing I needed now was a stalker!
          
          "I don't care," she said stubbornly. "I won't give up. I know you'll fall for me in the end."
          
          "What the -" She smiled when she saw the reaction on my face. "I. Will. Never. Fall. For. You."
          
          Analee's smile grew wider. "I can always make you love me."
          
          "What?" I shouted.
          
          She bit her lower lip again, her eyes gleaming with anticipation.
          
          "You are a pathetic little bitch," I said through gritted teeth. Was this demon making fun of me? Was this some kind of a joke for her?
          
          She walked gracefully towards me and before i could even move a muscle, she tip - toed and kissed me on the lips.
          
          Damn! She stole my first kiss! The nerve of this girl!
          
          She moved her face an inch away from me and whispered huskily, "Well, I am the bitch who will make sure that one day you'll kneel before me begging for my affection."
          
          thanks! ^_^

stargazer0966

Hey! Do you mind checking out my new story My Suicidal Friday? I'd love some feedback! :D Thank you! 
          
          Amberlin's parents are always fighting. Every time they are, she runs away, trying to find that safe haven that we all have. 
          
          But as she does, she meets him...Colton. She falls for him, hard. But she can't help herself. It's odd how he sort of plays with her mind, and how she trusts his family so easily, so quickly. Too quickly to be real. 
          
          Something is definitely different about Colton. And she really notices it, when he burns her when many people are around and that he's cold when it's just the two of them. She can't seem to stop falling for him, no matter how unrealistic it or he is. 
          
          But it's not all fun and games. Especially when she goes back to her mom, and she gets kicked out. Then news about her dad leaves her heart broken, even if Colton is there. 
          
          Every time her mom and her try to make up, something gets in the way, and nothing is sane any more. Even if she realizes that she doesn't live in the real world anymore. She lives in Colton's... 
          
          ~Ash~

emily411

hey! 
          
          Hey (sorry I am from canada and cant believe I am talking to an australian cause I love Australia). Anyways, I just wanted to say hi cause I read your writing and I thought you might like this author.  I love this authors writing on wattpad and was wondering what you thought of her. Her name is NicolaSmith. 
          
          Heres a Link to one of her stories:
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/304472-casey-james-the-claiming
          
          I totally recommend it to you!!!

Shiryo

Hey I was wondering if you can take a look at my story...A Look Into a House Full of Lust Filled Vampires From The Eyes of The Girl They Could Not Kill (or you might also like) I Time Travel for Love. Thanks! 
          *Blanca*