riddlexzvb
Hi people. I just wanted to announce that there will be other POVS from side characters from now on in my story.
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riddlexzvb
S1ennaRiddle
Your writing is incredible! The storyline you have created is coming together really well, and the way you present your characters gives a realistic view for your readers. The only thing that needs fixing is splitting up paragraphs; many people are put off by large blocks of text, but spacing them out will keep readers engaged. As for punctuation, I’m really impressed. To maintain consistency, you might want to run your chapters through websites that check grammar and punctuation, so you won’t have to worry about any language barriers and make it clear which character is speaking. Hope this helps, and I can’t wait to read more of your story!
riddlexzvb
@S1ennaRiddle oh okay thank you, I will definitely do that. Have a nice rest of your day or night :)
S1ennaRiddle
@riddlexzvb Sorry for any confusion earlier. During the dialogue between characters, it was sometimes unclear who was speaking. Adding more 'she said/he said' will help clarify the conversation. If English isn't your first language, using websites to check grammar and punctuation can be very helpful. I hope this was more helpful!