I need serious help with my writing skills and would love any feedback! -_- self loathing

Please let me know if I'm info dumping in any chapters. Am I rambling on? Is it too choppy? I usually appreciate a story that is to the point but I think maybe I'm not painting a detailed enough picture at times.
Comments please!
Input!
Constructive criticisms!
Thanks so much :D
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rienicole rienicole Mar 18, 2019 05:27AM
.... *heavy sigh* .... All I can say is medical school.
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Found in Ninebark
Katelynn has been feeling aimless and alone since graduation. Her best friend has moved away to university...
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